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Showing posts with label 2015 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2015 writing. Show all posts

Monday, 9 November 2015

Speechmarks


Task One
‘Said’ is a common word used to show people are speaking in stories. Think of 6 different, more interesting words and type them here.
1.”says”          2.”yelled”
3.”mimicked” 4.”asked”
5.”whispered” 6.”shouted”


Task Two
Choose 3 of the words you have written for task one and put them into sentences with speech in them to show me you can use them in context.
“hey john” yelle santana
“hey ramen” whispered john
“can i have a dollar please” asked rob


Task Three
Put the speech marks in the correct places.
1. “Stand there!” shouted Mr Cockcroft.
2. Phil cried , “watch out for that door!”
3. “Please don’t hurt me”, begged the little man.
4. The crowd chanted “United! United!”
5. “Run! The house is on fire!” screamed Creole.
6. Tim asked , “what’s the date please?”
7. “Is it nearly dinner?” asked Anna. I’m “starving”.
8. “You’re early”, “said” the waiter. “Your table isn’t quite ready”.
9. “I can’t play out tonight”, explained Rachel. “I’ve got too much homework to do”.

10. “It’s no use crying”, snapped Tony. “You’ll only make me angrier”.

Monday, 21 September 2015

TREE Recount

WALT - use TREE to write a recount.


Use this space to plan your writing:
















Wednesday, 16 September 2015

Cross Country

Cross Country

Last week on monday we had our cross country. I was nervous as a person doing a big speech front of the hole school. So as the year seven’s got to the starting line my friends Temauri, Maurice, PJ, Simon, Tevita, Taiaha and Tevita s said “Henry, your going to come first place because your faster than us ” . And I was “ummm i’m not sure about that so yeah” .

As Mr Burt said “on your mark, get set”then he clapped the wood. We ran fast, so one of us wanted to get to 1st place. But all of a sudden I tripped on the grass and face planted to the mud and  it was a funny moment for me.  I got up and started running and laughing with Maurice. Then after that we got focused and started to get serious.

We jogged until it was our 1st lap. As we past the finish line here goes our 1st lap. Man I was so tired that I started to sweat hard. The thing we were was sliding in the mud it was fun.

Me and my friends were stopped sliding and got focus again. It was hot man I almost stopped and walk but I said to myself “Don’t stop ” . So I didn't stop and I kept running until I got to the finish line. I was coming 4th place and I wanted get into the top 3.

When we saw the finish line I wanted to blitz but they past me. But I came 4th place It was OK at least I tried my best. After that I went had a drink, I was thirsty as.