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Friday 19 February 2016

Narative writing: Theme park zombie

Every picture tells a story. Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about this photo.

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Title - What is the title of your story
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Orientation - Sets the scene with who, what, where, when.  Captures the reader’s interest.
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Problem - What problem or issue disrupts normal life and needs a response from the character(s).
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Solution  - How is the problem solved or attempted to be solved.

Use the T.O.P.S to plan your writing first.

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Theme park zombie apocalypse
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It started at Jeff’s and Henry’s house playing games and watching movies.
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They went theme park, Stayed there until night time then the zombie apocalypse started.

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They tried finding a weapon to kill the zombies but jeff got corned and died. Henry was left but he had to escape for by driving home.  




Theme park zombies apocalypse

It started at Jeff and Henry playing games and watching movies. They were thinking of going to a fun place, “Let’s go to the theme park!” Jeff said. Henry agreed with Jeff, “Instead of playing games and watching movies we should just go to theme park” Henry said. So they drove to the theme park to have some fun. When they got there, they started walking around looking for the roller coaster. once they found it they went on it again, again, again and again until 10:00 which when the theme park closed.


The theme park closed down and they were the last ones to leave. Jeff said “ I feel dizzy aaaas, how about you Henry” , “ same is me” Henry replied. There was someone walking out from the shop with a wound on his leg and it was zombie! There were heaps of zombies then the zombie apocalypse started!


They were running off to find a weapon to kill the zombies. Jeff went to get this weapon near the corner, but this zombie climbed over the fence then grabbed Jeff’s shirt. Jeff try to hit it but the others came and cornered him. “Oh NOO JEFF” shouted Henry, Jeff got cornered and died. Henry had to leave Jeff so he went in the car and drove home.

THE END