P1.One day there was a mother living with five little pigs were being lazy.The mother went to the big house to go cook some pizza for the five little pigs.The mothers job was going to a bakery to cook some sausage roll,pizza bread and some bread. And the five little pigs were supposed to go to school village.
P2.When the mother came home she asked the five little pigs “Did you go to school?” so the five little pigs replied “Yes we did”. So the mother asked the mouse wanted to find out how they didn,t go school and the mouse replied i don’t know.
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